Glossary entry

Italiano term or phrase:

a ciò che il manto d’oro e di azzurro trasmette e permette, ora, a chi ne coglie

Inglese translation:

at what the cloak of gold and azure reveals to the knowing beholder in the here and now

Added to glossary by Maria Burnett
Jan 22, 2008 20:43
16 yrs ago
Italiano term

a ciò che il manto d’oro e di azzurro trasmette e permette, ora, a chi ne coglie

Da Italiano a Inglese Arte/Letteratura Poesia e Prosa literary essay
more context:
L’animaletto pare fronteggiare, con tutto il suo impegno, latenti e minacciose ombre provenienti, cupe ed incombenti, dal lato sinistro ed inferiore della tela, mentre il “femminile “dell’opera, nella sua semplicità, volge uno sguardo dolce e stupefatto a ciò che il manto d’oro e di azzurro trasmette e permette, ora, a chi ne coglie il senso reale.

Discussion

Maria Burnett (asker) Jan 22, 2008:
let me rephrase: trasmette e permette ora a chi ne coglie. I don't think it would make much sense any shorter. I am not sure it makes sense now.
BrigitteHilgner Jan 22, 2008:
Please note: The kudoz rules state that you should only ask for the translation of a word, not a whole sentence.
Maria Burnett (asker) Jan 22, 2008:
Piaia's work
simon tanner Jan 22, 2008:
I wonder if the writer actually grasps the senso reale of what he/she has produced! What work is this talking about?

Proposed translations

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11 ore
Selected

at what the cloak of gold and azure reveals to the knowing beholder in the here and now

A possible alternative:

while the feminine side of the work, in its simplicity, gazes in tender amazement at what the cloak of gold and azure reveals to the knowing beholder in the here and now
(shamelessly copied from Pauley's idea, that "here and now" bit...)
Peer comment(s):

agree Paul O'Brien : very nice.
10 ore
thanks Pauley, you're a real sport!
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
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1 ora

to what the golden and light blue mantel transmits and permits, now, to who understands its real ..

honestly I would go with a "literal" translation - there is already enough fantasy in the text :-)

however, can they mean that understanding the real meaning of the art piece can "permit" you to go far with your thoughts or anything similar?
Peer comment(s):

agree Desiree Bonfiglio
8 ore
thanks
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3 ore

see answer below

"towards that which the gold and sky-blue mantle conveys and consents in the here and now to anyone who grasps its genuine significance".

or some such.
Peer comment(s):

disagree James (Jim) Davis : This is art criticism, not an ode to the painter!
1 giorno 7 ore
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6 ore

at what the cloak of gold and azzure transmits and consents, to those who grasp its real meaning.

while in its simplicity the "feminine" part of the work takes a gentle and amazed look at what the cloak of gold and azzure transmits and consents, to those who grasp its real meaning.

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Note added at 18 hrs (2008-01-23 14:57:44 GMT)
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Uggh forgot "now" which was a typing error, I had translated it in my mind.
"while in its simplicity the "feminine" part of the work takes a gentle and amazed look at what the cloak of gold and azzure transmits and consents now, to those who grasp its real meaning."
Peer comment(s):

agree Christina Townsend
10 ore
disagree Paul O'Brien : not poetic enough...
16 ore
Hi Pauley. Either post or vote.
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