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从一段文字的翻译看国内学术著作翻译的乱象
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Jinhang Wang
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我比较倾向于 result 或 effect Jun 20, 2014

nigerose wrote:

窃以为，consequence在这个句子中是这个意思:
Significance; importance:
重要重大意义；重要性：


你看一下整句话的结构： the ..... consequences.......result from...........
 
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consequence Jun 20, 2014

J.H. Wang wrote:

nigerose wrote:

窃以为，consequence在这个句子中是这个意思:
Significance; importance:
重要重大意义；重要性：


你看一下整句话的结构： the ..... consequences.......result from...........

consequence取“意义”的词义，套这句话的结构也说得通。
consequence取“影响”的词义也说得过去，取“后果”的词义不合适。
 
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“后果” 在中文中含有贬义 Jun 20, 2014

nigerose wrote:

J.H. Wang wrote:

nigerose wrote:

窃以为，consequence在这个句子中是这个意思:
Significance; importance:
重要重大意义；重要性：


你看一下整句话的结构： the ..... consequences.......result from...........

consequence取“意义”的词义，套这句话的结构也说得通。
consequence取“影响”的词义也说得过去，取“后果”的词义不合适。


的确有点不合适。
 
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影响 Jun 20, 2014

影响 is indeed a good choice of words - very appropriate in this context. Sorry to say, I actually didn't notice it being used in the original translation; I kind of skimmed over hj's original post.
 
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